Part 1 – Rewrite

It started like any other Tuesday.

The coffee maker hummed in the kitchen, the smell of burnt grounds filling the air. Jason sat at the dining table, half-heartedly scribbling on his homework, pencil tapping against the page in distracted rhythm. I was in the living room with my laptop, scrolling through bills and bank alerts.

Nothing felt unusual. No shadow on the wall. No warning of the storm already brewing.

And then the notification appeared.

Your balance has fallen below the minimum threshold.

At first, I frowned. That couldn’t be right. Jason’s college fund wasn’t just above the minimum—it was untouchable. Six years of careful saving, every overtime check, every holiday bonus tucked away for his future. Laura and I had sworn never to touch it. We’d both called it sacred.

I clicked the alert.

And froze.

The account wasn’t low.

It was empty.

Not $10. Not $100. But $0.00.

No transaction history. No pending deposits. Nothing but a blank screen where six years of sacrifice should have been.

My chest tightened. I rubbed my eyes, refreshed the page, convinced it had to be a glitch. Banks mess up sometimes. Maybe the site was down.

But the number didn’t change.

Zero.

“Laura?” I called, my voice sharp, echoing down the hall.

Silence.

“Laura!” Louder this time, almost a shout.

No answer.

I stood, panic prickling the back of my neck. She wasn’t home.

That’s when everything started clicking in ways I didn’t want it to.

For weeks, Laura had been acting… different.

A little more distant. A little too dressed up for quick errands. Brushing off questions with vague excuses. I’d chalked it up to stress, midlife restlessness, the pressure of bills.

But now?

The pit in my stomach told me I’d been a fool.

I snatched my phone and dialed her number. Straight to voicemail.

I called again. Same result.

My heart thudded against my ribs.

Jason wandered into the room, munching on an apple, his hair sticking up in the back like he’d just woken from a nap.

“Where’s Mom?” I asked, trying to steady my voice.

He shrugged. “She said she had to go somewhere.”

Somewhere.

The word stabbed like a dagger.

I logged into our joint credit card account, palms sweating.

And there it was.

Transaction after transaction: first-class flights, five-star hotels, luxury restaurants. Miami. Las Vegas. Los Angeles.

My wife was living large—on money meant for our son’s future.

I slammed the laptop shut, breath ragged. My marriage hadn’t been perfect—arguments, silences, the slow erosion of intimacy—but this? This was beyond betrayal.

She hadn’t just taken from me. She’d stolen from Jason.

Jason tilted his head, watching me with that unnervingly calm expression children sometimes wear when they sense more than they should.

“It’s fine, Dad,” he said with a smile too practiced, too knowing for a ten-year-old. “I fixed everything.”

The words barely registered. At the time, I thought he was just trying to comfort me, to patch over the silence with childish optimism.

But something about his tone lodged in my mind.

Like he wasn’t making a promise.
Like he was telling me a fact.

That night, after Jason went to bed, I checked the closet.

Her suitcase was gone.

The good one. The one with the hard shell and the sticker from our honeymoon in San Diego still clinging to the corner.

The truth hit me like a freight train:

Laura hadn’t just stolen the money.
She hadn’t just left for the night.

She wasn’t coming back.

I sat alone in the dark, every lie replaying in my head. Every excuse. Every forced smile.

Anger came in waves—hot, cold, hotter still.

But beneath it all, a new fear took root.

Because when Jason had said, “I fixed everything,” it hadn’t sounded like make-believe.

It had sounded like certainty.

And I couldn’t shake the feeling that my son knew far more than he was letting on.

[End of Part 1 — Cliffhanger: Laura is gone, Jason’s chilling “I fixed everything” lingers.]
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Part 2 – Rewrite

The morning after Laura vanished, the apartment felt like a crime scene.

Coffee grounds still clung to the filter from yesterday. Her perfume lingered faintly in the hallway. The indentation of her pillow remained on the bed, mocking me with its absence.

But the closet was bare. The suitcase was gone. And so was she.

I stumbled through the motions: shaving, making toast Jason didn’t eat, scrolling through emails I couldn’t process.

Everywhere I turned, reminders of her betrayal stared back. The framed photo from our trip to San Diego. The shoes she’d left by the door, not the good pair—the ones she didn’t care enough to take.

I sat at the table, staring at bills stacked like accusations, and felt the weight of the college fund’s empty balance suffocating me.

Jason padded in, hair messy, holding a Lego figure in one hand.

“You okay, Dad?” he asked. His voice was steady, unnervingly so.

“I’m fine,” I lied.

He studied me for a beat, then said again with that calm smile: “Don’t worry. I told you—I fixed everything.”

At first, I brushed it off. Kids say strange things when they’re scared. But Jason wasn’t scared. He was composed, collected, as if none of this pierced him the way it gutted me.

When I broke down that afternoon—head in my hands, anger boiling over—Jason simply watched.

No tears. No fear. Just that same steady expression.

“Mom’s not coming back,” I said finally, my voice cracking.

“I know,” he replied matter-of-factly. “That’s why I’m working on it.”

Working on it?

“What do you mean?” I pressed.

Jason only shrugged. “You’ll see.”

The days blurred.

I called her phone until voicemail felt like a curse.
I checked our accounts compulsively, watching the numbers dwindle as charges stacked.
I sat awake at night, guilt gnawing at me—how could I have missed this? How could I let it happen under my nose?

And through it all, Jason carried on like nothing had changed. He went to school, did his homework, played with Legos. But every so often, I’d catch him… different.

Typing furiously on his tablet, his face scrunched in concentration.
Whispering into the phone, retreating into corners.
Slipping into the garage for hours, locking the door behind him.

One evening, curiosity overrode exhaustion.

I walked into the garage.

And froze.

Whiteboards covered in diagrams, equations, flowcharts. A laptop streaming lines of code like something out of a spy thriller. On the workbench, wires and circuits scattered around a soldering iron still hot.

Jason looked up, startled, and instinctively tried to block the whiteboard with his small frame.

“What is all this?” I asked, my voice sharp.

“Nothing, Dad. Just a school project.”

I raised an eyebrow. “A school project? Since when does fourth grade require surveillance equipment?”

His cheeks flushed crimson. For a second, I thought he might confess. But then his lips pressed into a thin line.

“You wouldn’t get it.”

He stuffed tools into a box and stormed past me.

That night, sleep was impossible.

Every time I closed my eyes, I saw Jason in the garage, soldering wires with the precision of someone twice his age. I saw the whiteboard covered in equations. I heard his words again, echoing in my head: “I fixed everything.”

Fixed what?
Fixed how?

I wanted to confront him, demand answers. But exhaustion pinned me down.

And, if I was honest, fear kept me quiet.

The next morning, I found him in the kitchen, typing away on his laptop.

He didn’t even notice me standing in the doorway. His fingers flew across the keyboard with a confidence no ten-year-old should possess.

“Jason,” I said softly.

He froze. “Yeah, Dad?”

I wanted to ask. What are you doing? What are you planning?

But the words lodged in my throat.

Instead, I said, “Breakfast is ready.”

By the third day, his behavior escalated.

He covered the whiteboard with a sheet when he wasn’t using it. He locked the garage door. He carried his tablet everywhere, never leaving it unattended.

And when I asked why he was spending so much time alone, his response was chilling.

“I told you, Dad. I’m fixing it.”

“Fixing what?”

He looked up from his screen, eyes calm, almost adult.

“Everything.”

That night, as Jason slept, I stood outside his door, hand on the knob, listening to his steady breathing.

I wanted to believe he was coping in his own way. That this was harmless tinkering, coding games, childish imagination.

But deep down, I knew better.

Something was happening. Something bigger than I understood.

And whatever Jason was building in that garage—it wasn’t just a hobby.

[End of Part 2 — Cliffhanger: Jason’s secret projects grow darker, his calm words — “I’m fixing everything” — now sound like a warning.]

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Part 3 – Rewrite

The phone rang late in the afternoon.

I was at the sink, staring blankly out the window, hands motionless in the dishwater. Jason sat cross-legged on the living room floor, tapping away on his tablet, face lit by its glow.

When I glanced at the caller ID, my stomach dropped.

Laura.

For a moment, I considered letting it ring. After everything she’d done—after the college fund, the suitcase, the silence—what could she possibly say that I wanted to hear?

But curiosity poisoned me. Against my better judgment, I swiped to answer.

“What do you want?” My voice was cold, sharper than I intended.

Her reply was frantic, trembling. “Alex… oh God, Alex, you have to help me.”

I laughed bitterly. “Help you? You emptied our son’s college account and vanished with your boyfriend. Why would I ever help you?”

“Please, just listen,” she begged, words tumbling over each other. “Something’s gone wrong. Everything’s gone wrong.”

I gripped the counter until my knuckles whitened. “What are you talking about?”

“It’s Damian,” she whispered, nearly sobbing. “He’s gone. Disappeared. All his accounts—mine too—they’re frozen. I can’t access anything, Alex. Nothing. And now the police are looking for me.”

Her words hit like a slap, but instead of sympathy, a cold satisfaction bloomed in my chest.

“You don’t say,” I muttered.

“I swear, Alex, I didn’t mean for any of this to happen,” she cried. “I just—”

“You just what?” My voice cracked like a whip. “You just stole from your own son? You just ran off with a scammer while we picked up the pieces? Spare me.”

On the other end, she sobbed harder. “I have nothing. No money, no ID. I’m stuck in Miami with nowhere to go. I need you.”

Before I could answer, Jason appeared in the doorway. Tablet tucked under his arm. Eyes steady, too steady for a ten-year-old.

“Who’s on the phone?” he asked.

I hesitated. “…Your mother.”

His expression flickered—darkness, then calm. He stepped closer.

“Put it on speaker,” he said.

“Jason, trust me—”

“Dad.” His voice cut like a command, not a request. “Put it on speaker.”

Against every instinct, I obeyed.

“You’re on speaker now,” I said flatly. “Jason’s here.”

On the line, a sharp intake of breath. “Jason,” Laura said, her tone softening, dripping with maternal sugar. “Sweetheart, it’s Mommy.”

“Save it,” Jason snapped. His voice was cold, detached. Not the voice of a child.

“Jason, please,” she pleaded. “I know I hurt you. I know I made mistakes—”

“You didn’t make a mistake,” Jason cut in, arms crossed. “You betrayed us. You stole my future. And now you’re calling because you’re scared. That’s pathetic.”

I stared at him, stunned.

Laura’s voice cracked. “I’m still your mother. I love you. I didn’t mean—”

“You don’t love me,” Jason said bluntly. “If you did, you wouldn’t have left. You wouldn’t have chosen Damian over us. You deserve everything that’s happening to you.”

Her sobs filled the line. “Please, Jason. Please help me.”

And then Jason smiled. A small, chilling smile that sent a shiver racing down my spine.

“Don’t worry, Mom,” he said calmly. “I already did.”

Silence.

Laura’s voice wavered. “…What do you mean?”

Jason leaned closer to the phone. “Let’s just say Damian won’t be hurting anyone anymore. And neither will you.”

The line went dead.

I stood frozen, staring at my son. My pulse hammered in my ears.

“What did you do?” I whispered.

Jason looked up at me, calm, almost proud.

“I told you, Dad,” he said. “I fixed everything.”

The words lodged in my chest, heavier than lead.

Pride? Horror? Fear? I didn’t know what I felt—only that nothing about this was normal.

My ten-year-old had just silenced his mother with the confidence of someone who’d planned her downfall.

And as I looked at him, calm as stone, I realized I no longer knew what my son was capable of.

[End of Part 3 — Cliffhanger: Jason’s chilling admission “I fixed everything” now carries terrifying weight.]

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Part 4 – Rewrite

The house was too quiet after Jason’s revelation.

He’d gone back to his room, tablet glowing under the crack of his door, while I sat on the couch, staring at my hands.

A ten-year-old had just admitted to outmaneuvering his own mother and her criminal boyfriend. And he’d said it with the calmness of someone describing homework.

I should have felt relieved—protected, even. But instead, unease coiled tight in my gut.

The phone rang again the next evening.

This time, the number was unknown.

“Hello?” I answered, my voice low.

A growl responded. “You think you’re clever, Alex?”

My blood froze. Damian.

“You ruined me,” he spat. “You and that little brat of yours.”

I gripped the phone tighter, forcing my voice steady. “You brought this on yourself. You stole from us. You didn’t think there’d be consequences?”

He laughed, humorless and sharp. “Consequences? You don’t know who you’re dealing with. You think this is over? It’s not. Not by a long shot.”

I glanced at Jason, who had appeared silently in the doorway, watching me with those unnerving calm eyes.

“What are you going to do, Damian?” I asked, my patience wearing thin. “You’re broke. You’re wanted. You’re finished.”

“Maybe,” he said, voice chillingly calm. “But I’m not going down alone. I know where you live. I know where your son goes to school. And if you think I’m just going to sit back while you ruin me, you’re dead wrong.”

The line went dead.

I stood frozen, the phone heavy in my hand.

Jason stepped closer, his tone disturbingly steady. “Let him try.”

I snapped my head toward him. “This isn’t a game, Jason! He’s dangerous. We need to call the police.”

Jason shook his head. “The police won’t do anything until it’s too late. But I can handle this.”

“Handle it? You’re ten years old!”

His lips curled into that same unsettling smile. “Trust me, Dad. I’ve got one more move to make.”

That night, Jason disappeared into the garage again.

The door stayed locked for hours. The faint glow of his desk lamp bled through the window, illuminating shadows of wires, tools, and something larger I couldn’t quite make out.

I paced the living room, every creak of the house making me flinch. Every sound outside felt like a threat.

By the time Jason finally emerged, well past midnight, he looked exhausted—but satisfied.

“It’s done,” he said simply, brushing past me without explanation.

Two days later, the doorbell rang.

It was late afternoon, the sun bleeding orange across the street.

Jason looked up from his tablet. His expression unreadable.

“Don’t answer it,” I said instinctively, my chest tightening.

Jason stood anyway, walked to the door, and peered through the peephole.

Then, without hesitation, he unlocked it and swung it open.

Damian filled the doorway.

He was larger than life, eyes bloodshot, hair disheveled, jaw clenched so tight the veins in his neck bulged. He looked like a man stripped of everything but rage.

“Where is he?” Damian snarled, stepping into the threshold without waiting.

I moved to block him, heart pounding. “You need to leave.”

Damian sneered. “Not until your little brat explains how he ruined my life.”

To my horror, Jason stepped forward.

Calm. Composed. Almost bored.

“You did that yourself,” he said evenly.

Damian’s jaw tightened. “Listen, you little—”

“You’re broke,” Jason cut him off. “You’re wanted in three states. And now you’re here, threatening us in our own home. Smart move.”

I grabbed Jason’s arm, trying to pull him back. “Jason, stop.”

But he shook me off and stepped closer to Damian, his small frame dwarfed by the man towering over him.

“You shouldn’t have come here,” Jason said, voice cold as steel. “You’re just making things worse for yourself.”

Damian barked a laugh, but it cracked at the edges. “Worse? Kid, I’ve got nothing left to lose.”

Jason tilted his head, lips curling into a chilling smile. “That’s where you’re wrong.”

Before I could react, Jason reached into his pocket and pulled out a small black device.

He pressed a button.

Damian’s phone buzzed in his pocket. He pulled it out, frowning at the screen. Files began popping up, one after another, spilling across the display.

“What the hell is this?” Damian demanded.

“Proof,” Jason said simply.

I realized then what Jason had done.

He hadn’t just been collecting evidence. He’d been building a trap.

Damian’s phone wasn’t just buzzing—it was streaming, live, every threat, every message, every call straight to local law enforcement.

Jason had turned Damian’s own venom into a noose.

Damian’s face twisted in fury. He lunged forward, but froze at the sound of sirens wailing down the block.

Jason didn’t flinch. He only stepped aside, his eyes never leaving Damian.

“That’ll be for you,” Jason said calmly.

Red and blue lights flashed through the window.

Police cars screeched to a stop outside our house.

Damian turned back to Jason, his face a mask of fury and panic.

“This isn’t over,” he spat.

“Yes, it is,” Jason replied, voice low, final.

The door burst open behind him. Officers stormed in, guns drawn. Damian raised his hands, defeated.

As they dragged him out, I stood frozen in the doorway, trying to process what had just happened.

Jason slipped the black device back into his pocket, his expression unreadable.

“I told you I had one more move,” he said quietly.

And as the police car carried Damian away, lights flashing against the walls, I looked at my son—my ten-year-old son—standing there like a general who’d just won a war.

For the first time, I wasn’t sure if I was proud…

…or terrified.

[End of Part 4 — Cliffhanger: Damian arrested, but Jason’s chilling composure leaves Alex questioning what his son is becoming.]

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Part 5 – Rewrite

The house was still patched with cardboard where the brick had shattered our window. Shards of glass clung stubbornly to the carpet like reminders that even silence carried scars.

Damian was gone—hauled off in the back of a squad car, his fury echoing in the hallway long after the sirens faded.

For the first time in weeks, the air felt lighter.

But peace never stays long.

The phone rang again.

I recognized the number instantly.

Laura.

My first instinct was to ignore it. But some masochistic corner of me wanted to hear her voice, to let her twist in her own desperation.

I answered.

“What now, Laura?” My tone was sharp, flat.

Her voice on the other end was barely recognizable. Weak. Hoarse. Stripped of all the arrogance she once carried.

“Alex…” she began, then faltered. “I don’t want your money. I don’t even know what I want anymore.”

For the first time, she sounded… broken.

“Then why are you calling me?” I demanded.

“I’m in trouble,” she whispered. “Real trouble.”

“You don’t say,” I shot back.

She ignored the jab, words tumbling out. “The police think I was part of Damian’s scams. They froze my accounts, seized everything. I swear I didn’t know what he was doing at first, but by the time I realized, it was too late. They think I’m guilty, Alex. I have nothing.”

I laughed bitterly. “That makes two of us. Or did you forget you wiped out Jason’s college fund to finance your little adventure?”

“I was stupid,” she admitted, her voice cracking. “I thought… I thought Damian loved me. I thought he’d take care of me.”

“And how’s that working out for you?” I asked coldly.

Her silence was answer enough.

Finally, she broke down.

“You’re all I have left,” she whispered. “You and Jason.”

Her words punched me in the chest. Not because they moved me, but because of how delusional they were.

“You don’t have us,” I said firmly. “You lost us the moment you chose him over your family.”

Her sobs grew louder. “I need a second chance. I’m still Jason’s mother. Please, Alex.”

“Second chance?” I barked. “You stole from your own son. You abandoned him for a con artist. And now that your little fantasy has collapsed, you want to crawl back? No. Absolutely not.”

The line went silent except for her ragged breathing.

Then she asked quietly, “So that’s it? You’re just going to turn your back on me?”

I let out a bitter laugh. “You turned your back on us first. Now you can live with it.”

I hung up before she could respond.

When I turned around, Jason was standing in the doorway.

“Was that Mom?” he asked.

I nodded. “She wanted to come back.”

Jason didn’t flinch. His expression stayed calm, almost bored.

“Did you tell her no?”

“I did.”

He nodded once, satisfied. “Good. She doesn’t deserve our help.”

I opened my mouth to argue—to remind him that forgiveness was supposed to be part of healing—but the words died on my tongue.

Because when I looked at him, I realized he wouldn’t understand.

Maybe he already understood too well.

In the days that followed, life slipped into a strange rhythm.

I returned to work. Jason returned to school. The house was quiet, almost peaceful, but that peace felt fragile—like glass stretched too thin.

And Jason… Jason grew more secretive.

His tablet never left his side. His projects in the garage multiplied. Drones, circuits, code I couldn’t decipher.

Whenever I pressed, he’d give the same answer: “I’m keeping us safe.”

One evening, as I taped the cardboard tighter over the broken window, Jason appeared at my side.

“Dad,” he said, “are you mad at me?”

I frowned. “Mad at you? For what?”

“For everything I did. For going after Mom and Damian without telling you.”

I sighed, rubbing my forehead. “Jason… what you did… it’s not something a ten-year-old should ever have to do.”

“But I did it,” he said simply. “And it worked.”

“It’s not just about whether it worked,” I said carefully. “It’s about what it means.”

Jason tilted his head, studying me.

“What if you can’t protect us?” he asked softly. “What if it’s up to me?”

The question hollowed me out.

Because deep down, I knew he wasn’t wrong.

I had been paralyzed by grief and anger. Jason had acted. And that truth cut deeper than any betrayal Laura had left behind.

That night, as I lay awake staring at the ceiling, Laura’s last words echoed in my head.

“I’m still Jason’s mother. I just need a second chance.”

But Jason’s voice drowned hers out, sharper, colder, unyielding:

“She doesn’t deserve our help.”

And for the first time, I wondered if my son was right.

Or if I should be terrified that he was.

[End of Part 5 — Cliffhanger: Laura begs for a second chance, Alex says no, Jason coldly affirms she “doesn’t deserve it.” The father now fears his son’s heart may already be too cold.]

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Part 6 – Rewrite

The weeks after Damian’s arrest passed in eerie calm.

No more threats.
No more sirens.
No more bricks through the window.

For the first time in months, the house was quiet. Peaceful, even.

But it was the kind of peace that felt fragile—like glass stretched thin, ready to shatter at the slightest touch.

Jason slid back into routine with unnerving ease.

He went to school. Did his homework. Ate his cereal in silence.

But in the evenings, he disappeared into the garage.

I’d find him hunched over wires and circuit boards, eyes narrowed in concentration, soldering sparks lighting his face.

When I asked what he was working on, he shrugged. “Just building.”

Building what? He never said.

One afternoon, I opened the door without knocking.

The garage was a workshop of controlled chaos.

On one side, a sleek drone sat on the table, rotors gleaming under the lamp. Nearby, a whiteboard cluttered with diagrams and equations stretched from top to bottom.

Jason looked up, surprised but not rattled.

“Hey, Dad.”

“What is all this?” I asked.

He smiled faintly. “Projects. They keep my mind busy.”

I leaned against the doorframe. “You’re always fixing things.”

“I like fixing things,” he said simply.

“You don’t always have to,” I told him gently. “Sometimes it’s okay to let things just… be.”

Jason paused, setting down his soldering iron. He stared at me for a long moment, then said quietly:

“I don’t know how to do that.”

My chest tightened. “What do you mean?”

Jason’s eyes didn’t waver.

“If something’s broken, I have to fix it. If there’s a problem, I have to solve it. That’s just how my brain works.”

I wanted to tell him it wasn’t his responsibility, that he didn’t need to carry burdens bigger than him. But I knew better.

Jason wasn’t like other kids.

And no amount of reassurance would change that.

“You’ve got a gift,” I said finally. “But gifts can be dangerous. You’ll have to decide how to use it… and who to trust with it.”

He nodded slowly, his expression unreadable. “I know.”

That night, as I sat alone in the living room, Laura’s last call echoed in my head.

“I’m still Jason’s mother. I just need a second chance.”

But louder than her sobs was Jason’s flat, cold verdict:

“She doesn’t deserve our help.”

And I couldn’t shake the fear that he was right.

Or worse—that he was learning to believe no one ever would.

Days blurred into weeks.

Jason brought home straight A’s. Teachers praised his brilliance. Parents complimented his politeness.

No one saw what I saw.

The calm too steady. The smile too knowing. The words too sharp for a ten-year-old’s mouth.

One evening, I found him asleep at his desk, tablet still glowing.

On the screen: lines of code, complex algorithms that made my head spin. Beside it, a notebook filled with sketches of drones, networks, circuits.

I closed the laptop softly, tucked a blanket around his shoulders, and kissed the top of his head.

He stirred, eyes half-opening.

“Dad?”

“Yeah, buddy?”

He smiled faintly. “Don’t worry. I’ll always protect us.”

And just like that, he drifted back to sleep.

I stood there in the doorway, heart torn between pride and dread.

My son was brilliant. Unstoppable. A survivor.

But as I watched him sleep, a chilling thought took root:

What happens when protection turns into control?

What happens when fixing everything means breaking anything—or anyone—in his way?

Laura had once said something to me in a broken whisper, right before I cut the call.

“You raised a son who doesn’t just survive. He conquers. But one day, Alex, his heart might be too cold to save.”

At the time, I dismissed it as guilt. As manipulation.

But now, staring at Jason’s sleeping face, I wasn’t so sure.

For now, the danger was gone. Damian was behind bars. Laura was out of our lives.

But the future?

The future belonged to Jason.

And I prayed to God he would use his gift to build… not to destroy.

Because I wasn’t sure the world—or my heart—could survive if he chose otherwise.

[End of Part 6 — Final: Jason’s brilliance is undeniable, but Alex lies awake, haunted by the fear that his son’s heart may already be too cold.]